Drabble: Pass The Legacy
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Title: Pass The Legacy
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Character: Cloud
Rating: G
Words: 100
Summary: When he's old, Cloud puts his swords on sale.
Disclaimer: Final Fantasy VII isn't mine and the story isn't written for profit.
When he's old, Cloud puts his swords on sale.
He and Tifa are both silent as they collect them all, admiring the blades that are still untouched by rust and testing how their weight feels in their hands. Cloud takes pride in the way he can still hold the Ultima Weapon with untrembling fingers, how the hilt still seems to be molded to his touch.
Putting the last sword away makes him ache, but when Tifa asks him if he's sure, her hand gentle on his shoulder, he says: "It's time for somebody else to do good with them."
And there's no regret.
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Character: Cloud
Rating: G
Words: 100
Summary: When he's old, Cloud puts his swords on sale.
Disclaimer: Final Fantasy VII isn't mine and the story isn't written for profit.
When he's old, Cloud puts his swords on sale.
He and Tifa are both silent as they collect them all, admiring the blades that are still untouched by rust and testing how their weight feels in their hands. Cloud takes pride in the way he can still hold the Ultima Weapon with untrembling fingers, how the hilt still seems to be molded to his touch.
Putting the last sword away makes him ache, but when Tifa asks him if he's sure, her hand gentle on his shoulder, he says: "It's time for somebody else to do good with them."
And there's no regret.
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Date: 2007-08-05 06:48 am (UTC)...is it safe to come out yet?
I actually really enjoyed this. I don't think I've ever seen another fic dealing with any of the characters in the twilight of their lives, and it's nice to see Cloud find some peace, even if it's taken that long. I wish it wasn't just a drabble, but you need to tell stories the way you see them.
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Date: 2007-08-05 07:53 am (UTC)I like fics where the characters have grown old, but sadly they're really rare, and I don't think I've ever seen any in FFVII. But I thought Cloud deserved some peace for his last days. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. This one is just a drabble, but maybe in the future there will be a longer story.
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Date: 2007-08-05 05:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-08-05 05:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-08-07 09:41 pm (UTC)*stalking you from Fanfiction.net* muahahahaha. *coughs* sorry!
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Date: 2007-08-08 12:24 pm (UTC)